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serai ([personal profile] serai) wrote2003-07-26 03:45 pm

On the Eve of Sunreturn

Title: On the Eve of Sunreturn
Rating: G
Pairing: None
Disclaimer: All credit for Middle-Earth and its extraordinary characters, places and stories go to the blessed Professor Tolkien. I don't make a dime off this, nor would I wish to.

Summary: Sam and his family at Yule.

On the Eve of Sunreturn


"And did he, Dad?"

"Yes, my boy, he did," Sam replied, smiling. "So when you're walking in the green fields of the Shire, remember Mr. Frodo, and everything he did for us."

The log crackled on the hearth, drops of sap snapping and sizzling, releasing their aroma of forests, and of nights spent under the stars. A knot popped like a cracker, and Frodo-lad jumped. His bright laughter followed, rillowing like snow-water down from the White Mountains. Then Elanor yawned, and her brother did likewise.

"Now look at you two, yawning like that," Rose chided as she got to her feet. "Come now, put on your cloaks. It's nearly Sunreturn." She took Elanor's hand and pulled her down off her father's lap. "Sam," Rose said. Her husband looked up. "It's time. Help me with the boughs."

Sam stood up, and nodded to Frodo. "Go on, help your mother now." As the boy ran after Rose, Sam turned to the hearth, and the little figure sitting there.

"Lily," Sam called softly. The child sat entranced, staring into the fire, its light sparkling in her hair like starlight on the dark night sea. He moved towards the hearth, and sat down next to her. "Lily."

She turned and looked at him, as if she'd only now noticed his presence. The soft pools of her eyes held a glimmer of sadness, at once new and so familiar that Sam's heart ached to see it.

"He was wounded, wasn't he?" she whispered.

"Yes, my dear, he was," he answered. "Wounded to the heart, but he was strong, as well. The strongest hobbit I ever knew."

After a long moment, she asked, "And he's gone, isn't he? Gone forever?"

There was no way to answer this, but with the truth. He nodded. "He's gone across the sea, to the Undying Lands. None have ever returned from there."

She turned back to the fire. Watching, Sam felt her loneliness, and the echo of the long terrible days in the wild came back to him, darkening the comfort of the parlor. He waited. After a minute, her voice murmured like a shadow.

"Has he been healed, Uncle? Is he well again?"

Sam drew in breath, and scolded himself. Don't you give in, he thought. If you weep, you'll only frighten the child. With a gentle hand, he stroked her hair.

"Yes, Lily, I believe he is well again. He took ship with the Elves, and old Mr. Gandalf. And if there's any healing in the world that could make him whole, he'd find it there, over the sea. Where the Valar still dwell, and there is no shadow, nor any enemy." He leaned over and kissed her forehead. She leaned against him for a moment, and they sat there, quiet in each other's company.

Finally Sam clapped a hand against his thigh and stood up. "Come now, your Aunt Rose is waiting. It's almost midnight."

She smiled a little smile at him. "Yes, Uncle. I'm coming."

Pulling on his cloak, Sam opened his mouth to speak, but said nothing. With a last glance at the child, he walked out.

The fire danced and leapt, reflecting in Lily's great blue eyes. Shapes writhed in the light - arrows and swords and spears of flame, forest branches leaved in light, glimmer of Elven eyes and waves of golden hair, a great beast of fire, a golden Ring. Her eyes danced with the play of light, but her heart remained still and listening, as it would all her life.

Listening for the sound of his voice.

[identity profile] green-ghost.livejournal.com 2003-07-27 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
Enchanting ficlet. I can hear Sam saying these words, you've caught his voice quite nicely!

[identity profile] singeaddams.livejournal.com 2003-07-27 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
That was really lovely. Who is Lily? Do you have her history somewhere?

[identity profile] keye.livejournal.com 2003-07-27 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
This is so melancholy, but sweet. I wonder also who Lily is, and where she got those great blue eyes.

Thank you for friending me, I've friended you back. :)
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[personal profile] fyrdrakken 2003-07-27 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
It's a sweet little bit, and I too would like to know a bit more about just who Lily is, since you've separated her out as something of a special character without adequately giving her a context for her apparent tie to Frodo...

Wonderful to see this again....

[identity profile] kete.livejournal.com 2003-07-27 08:40 am (UTC)(link)
as i voted for it once. where are ALL your stories? have you written something called "Shire Reckoning 1412"? as it has been recommended to me i would dearly like to read it, but where do i find it?

Thanks!

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2003-07-30 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I appreciate the kind words. Yeah, Sam has graced me with his words a number of times. Don't know what I did to deserve the attention, but I'm happy to listen! :)

I have it stashed away

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2003-07-30 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
in my head. Not sure if I'll ever write it out or not. I rather like the piece the way it is. I'm the kind of writer that likes to leave things up to the reader's imagination, and not put a lock on them. Who do you think Lily is?

Re: Nice surprise

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2003-07-30 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
*sigh* indeed. It's wonderful when he wants to tell me things. I so wish I could find a guy like him. But then, don't we all?

*sigh*

Re: Wonderful to see this again....

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2003-07-30 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh no, I didn't write Shire Reckoning 1412. That was [livejournal.com profile] strangerian. You can see the whole series here:

Shire Reckoning 1412

And thanks for the kind words! By the way, when did you vote for my story? I don't remember this one being up for anything.

I don't have an archive yet, which is why I'm uploading my stories here. It'll serve as one until I get a real website going. I've got space but absolutely no knowledge whatsoever. :D

Thanks so much!

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2003-07-30 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
As to Lily, see my reply to [livejournal.com profile] singeaddams, above. :)

Thank you, Fyr!!

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2003-07-30 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you like it. As to Lily, see my reply to [livejournal.com profile] singeaddams, above. :)

Re: Wonderful to see this again....

[identity profile] kete.livejournal.com 2003-07-31 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks for the link!

where did i vote for this? it could have been on henneth-annun as i do quite a lot of reviews there, but i'm not sure as it has been a while ago.

[identity profile] songs-of-winter.livejournal.com 2003-08-18 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
This is such a sweet story. Thank you for sharing it. :)

I personally like to fancy Lily as Frodo's daughter. Though who her mother might have been, I have no idea. But it's a nice thought to treasure, that something of Frodo will live on in the Shire beyond his life and the lives of his closest friends.

[identity profile] beizy.livejournal.com 2003-08-18 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, so lovely. Thank you for this!

Hee!

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2003-08-19 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I went to email you about something, but found your addy isn't listed. You can drop me a line if you'd like to talk more. :)

You're very welcome.

[identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com 2003-08-19 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you liked it! :)

Re: Hee!

[identity profile] songs-of-winter.livejournal.com 2003-08-19 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I sent you an e-mail. My addy is only visible to people on my friends list, since I had some trouble leaving it public.
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[personal profile] shirebound 2009-05-28 01:40 pm (UTC)(link)
This is very poignant and loving.