ext_28836 ([identity profile] serai1.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] serai 2004-12-04 02:33 am (UTC)

Feedback from Bandwench (1)

Oh my GAWD! Christmas came early this year . . . and I was very close to coming myself there. *ahem* There are no words to properly say thanks for a gift of heart such as this, but I will try anyway. THIS was brilliant . . . I feel like you've been peeking into the dark corners of my heart. *whispers* The thought of willing submissive Elijah is just almost too good to contemplate for long. *long shuddering sigh*

The collar, the long hair just asking to be tugged, the hand over the mouth--I can hear those desperate little wounded animal noises he would make in his throat and I like them, the description of the playful mock-cruel cat-n-mouse of this is just delicious and I thought I loved you BEFORE!

I am not done fangirling you by half but I want to be the first to comment and I WANT TO READ IT AGAIN! *shudders hard*

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