Ficlet: Watching Over You

[serai]

Sometimes a pic just hits me and knocks words out...


Watching Over You





How can there still be beauty in the world, when the very air burns like rage in the throat? I turn from the distant, unconcerned glittering to look on your dear face. Oh master, you've not enough spark left even to see the stars, have you, let alone wonder at their light? How can they dance in the sky above us, instead of cloaking themselves in mourning and wailing as I wish I could? Everything you have you've given, and more besides, yet still they shine uncaring. There's no one but me to see you and know.

Comments

[celandine-g.livejournal.com]

Oh my, I hadn't seen this one. *takes a deep breath* Thanks so much for the beautiful pic and the equally beautiful words.

Everything you have, you've given, and more besides, yet still they shine uncaring. There's no one but me to see you and know.

Very nice.

[serai1.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm very glad you like it.

[oxer12.livejournal.com]

I don't know if I can wait another 2 weeks. I think I will explode before then! That screencap is so beautiful, and your words fit it so well. :)

[serai1.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :)

[danachan.livejournal.com]

Wow. Just. Wow.

*clutches at chest for various reasons* What beautiful words. What a beautiful picture.

[serai1.livejournal.com]

Thanks, sweetie. I'm glad it affected you.

[westmoon.livejournal.com]

This is just gorgeous and heartbreaking, all at once.

[serai1.livejournal.com]

Wow, thank you! I'm glad you like it.

[rubynye.livejournal.com]

OK, that was so painfully beautiful. Just....oh.

[serai1.livejournal.com]

Thank you, hon. I'm so glad you like it. :)

the unconcerned glitter

[goldberry-b.livejournal.com]

how perfectly stated my dear

heartbreaking, thank you Serai

Goldie

Re: the unconcerned glitter

[serai1.livejournal.com]

you're welcome, sweetie. I'm glad you like it.

[serai1.livejournal.com]

You're welcome, hon! Thank you for liking it.

[fictualities.livejournal.com]

Christ, Serai, you made me cry. I didn't know anyone could do that with F/S any more.

*hands over tissue*

[serai1.livejournal.com]

Yay! Thanks for the compliment! Well, it's good to know you haven't lost all your feeling for Our Dear Hobbits. :)